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Literature
Silva 9 Chapter 7
Mercenary Squad 9
Chapter 7
Gabriel grunted as he yanked his wet clothes from his body dropping them with a wet “THUD” into the corner of the large tent. The small light given off by the two lanterns in the center of the dark green tent cast barely visible shadows that danced in tune as he maneuvered through the cramped quarters.  “I…hate…rain.” He mumbled as he laid out on his sleeping bag that had been placed in the middle of the shelter he, Cyrus, and Tank were sharing. “You mean you hate the rain when you get wet right?” Cyrus said dryly, his hood obscuring what Gabriel knew was a smirk.
The young man growled as the rain outside began to pour down even harder causing a cacophony of sounds to reverberate through the tent. As he sat up crossing his legs in front of him to look at his two brothers in arms, the silence between them was broken by Tank opening a candy bar he had kept in his satchel. “I don’t remember you as
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Literature
Mercenary Squad 9 Chapter 6
Mercenary Squad 9
Chapter 6
Squad 9 Is Born
Gabriel and Macha were quiet as Silas lead them away from their cell and toward the gated perimeter of the Imperial Garrison. While Gabriel marched on in silence, Macha looked over Silas as they walked along through the thick mud. Silas was definitly young, younger than Gabriel she figured, though it was hard to tell with his long black hair that hung down past  his shoulders and almost to his waist. He was definitely fused with a Bat, since his leathery bat wings were furled in on his back and seemed to pulse as his veins fed blood into them and occasionally flapped open for a moment before closing almost like a cowl around his body.
He wore baggy gray pants and white combat boots, along with a set of knee pads and shoulder pads which she guessed were in case his wings gave out and he crashed or if he had to fight. The most eye catching thing however was the strange combat suit he was wearing. It looked like a single metal plate coverin
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Literature
Mercenary Squad 9 Chapter 5
Mercenary Squad 9
Chapter 5
Making Yourself Known
Despite their best attempts to avoid confrontation, Gabriel now had a fight on his hands, and it wasn’t going to be easy. The dragon hybrid was easily 8ft tall compared to his 6ft. His arms and legs were covered in red scales, tough as any armor while Gabriel had only his silver fur. His chest was broader, his muscles were stronger, and unlike Gabriel who was calm and collected, the dragon was seething at rage from his failed attempt to intimidate the “fresh meat.” Smoke rose from his human nostrils as his eyes burned just as hot and bright as his inner fire. His red ponytail like hair almost looking as if it were the flames rising from his head.
“Forgive me for not being scared of your little light show. Fire isn’t really something I’m afraid of. After all, both my sister and I are from the lands of the Magus, so simple fire breathing and flame attacks just look like silly magic to us.” Gabriel
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Literature
Mercenary Squad 9 Chapter 4
Mercenary Squad 9
Chapter 4: New Home?
“The camp itself is 800 yards long by 600 yards wide. It is home to more than 200 mercenaries, 250 human camp aides, and a Imperial Army Garrison belonging to the 1st Eastern Army.” Sarah said as she marched ahead of Gabriel and Macha, using her sword to identify points of interest. “To the left you’ll see the Rank 10 to 8 barracks.” “You mean those wooden long cabins?” Macha said trying to clarify.
“Yes Miss Ames, that’s where you’ll be staying until your squad has advanced past rank 8.” Gabriel looked at the cabins as Sarah continued to talk. They were long and thin, shoddily constructed and in his opinion looked like they would fall apart. The slanted wooden roofs were darkened with age and with how narrow the buildings themselves were he figured they must only hold 5 to 10 mercenaries or aides inside them, which explained why there were so many of them lined up next to one anoth
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Literature
Mercenary Squad 9 Chapter 3
Mercenary Squad 9
Chapter 3: Castle in the Forest
Gabriel felt his stomach lurch and shake around as the truck carrying he and Macha drove deeper into the overgrown forest. He had wanted to walk, but Macha had pointed out that it was going to be a good few miles to reach Fort Silva, and she could fly while he couldn’t. So they instead had gotten a ride on a supply truck heading for the base. The soldier driving the truck at first hadn’t seemed too keen on giving them a lift, but with some kind words from Macha, followed by some death threats from Gabriel, he quickly relented and had let them ride along, or rather Macha sat up front with the driver while Gabriel rode in the back, with the supplies, and the other items, as the truck tossed and threw him around due to the hard ground they were driving on.
“We HAD to get transferred to the fort in the forest. We just HAD to be assigned to Fort Silva.” Gabriel mumbled as he thought back to the moment he and Macha had
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Literature
Mercenary Squad 9 Chapter 2
Mercenary Squad 9
Chapter 2: Changes
         When a body first regains its composure after passing out, the first thing that returns is your sight, followed by your sense of smell, hearing, and then everything else follows after that. For Gabriel, the first thing he saw was a bright light shining right in his face. His eyes squinted in reflex as the world around him continued to come into focus as his eyes quickly adjusted to the light hovering over him. His nose twitched as he inhaled a breath of air, but nothing caught his attention. It smelled like a sterile hospital room and around him as he turned his head that’s exactly what it looked like. A small room with him on a metal table a bright light shining his face that he cursed and wished would turn off.
“Good Morning Gabriel.” A mechanical voice cut through the silence of the room as Gabriel sat up. “Your transformation was a complete success. Though you did pass out upon leaving th
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Literature
Mercenary Squad 9 Chapter 1
Mercenary Squad 9
Chapter 1: A Wolf is Born
A quarter of a second…the time it takes for a normal human to perceive something is coming toward them. Half a second…the time it takes for a normal human to perceive that something is coming at them, and to get out of the way. Gabriel could literally feel the air vibrate as his opponent’s fist went rushing past his face narrowly avoiding knockout punch. His right hand shaped into a fist, cocked back and fired into his opponent’s chest sending him reeling to the ground gasping for air from the punch. Instinct followed as Gabriel brought his right elbow down on top of his attacker’s skull flooring him easily. “ENOUGH!” The command to cease fighting echoed across the ring as men in white suits, medics, came and took Gabriel’s opponent away.
“Gabriel how many times must I tell you that this is a training exercise, and you are not trying to kill your opponent!” The commander’s bald
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Literature
Mercenary Squad 9 Prologue
Mercenary Squad 9
Prologue
The continent of Unitas is a continent whose past has been bathed in blood. For generation after generation, the three species of humans have waged war on one another intending to purge all life but their own and rule the entire continent themselves. None of them knew that the Goddess Potentia had created the very continent they stood on, as a testament to her belief in unity. For when she created the land and introduced the humans to it, she believed that the humans would unite and work together to survive. Yet it was not to be, and the humans began to bicker and argue, which soon led to war and bloodshed. Angered by this Potentia scattered the humans to three different parts of the continent and erected mountains to keep them separated for as long as it took them to renounce the ways of violence.
During this time she gifted each of the three races with gifts and abilities creating three whole new races from humanity. The first, the Anima people, were given
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Literature
Children of the Guardian Final Chapter
Children of the Guardian
Chapter 23
The day had finally arrived and the castle was in full swing. The Gala was due to happen in just 5 hours and so much still had to be done. Castle servants were busy setting up the stage for the DJ’s and Trixie’s performances, and at the same time were decorating and setting up tables for ponies to stand at while they attended the party. Though, as they all worked something was amiss. Twilight was front and center using her leadership qualities to direct the flow of work around the whole castle. Midnight and Celestial Brush were busy setting up the artwork and decorations, and Sunlight and Kuni were helping the chefs lay out the food to be served later on. Even Miss Butterscotch Sundae herself had been invited to run the bar at the Gala, but David was nowhere to be seen.
“LANCE!” Midnight shouted his with royal voice to the patrolling body guard. “Yes my prince? What can I do for you?” “Lance go check on my fa
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Literature
Children of the Guardian Chapt 22
Children of the Guardian
Chapter 22
“You mean to tell me that we don’t have ANY entertainment lined up Twilight?” David said walking back and forth.
“Yes… I was hoping that Octavia and her band would be able to perform but they’re busy in New Hoof.” It was a week until the Gala was set to reopen and things were down to the wire. Every event, every piece of food, and every decoration was constantly checked off in David’s mind. While he was extremely happy that Midnight and Kuni had resolved their differences and would both be bringing dates to the Gala itself, he knew that there wouldn’t be a Gala at all if there was no entertainment.
“What about Vinyl Scratch?” Twilight brought up hopefully. David thought about it as he paced back and forth. Vinyl would be a great addition to the party, but she was probably booked solid. It was not surprise of course since Vinyl was the most famous DJ in all of Equestria, and since Davi
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Literature
Children of the Guardian Chap 21
Children of the Guardian
Chapter 21
"Midnight! You're here earlier than I thought you would be." Sunlight said smiling happily as she walked over to her brother.
"Y-yeah… I just wanted to make sure everything went okay." Midnight said trying to force a smile.
"You okay bro?" Sunlight asked cocking her head.
"Huh? Oh yeah, yeah I'm fine. Just a little tired is all. Um… Sunlight." Midnight started.
"Yes?"
"Do you mind if…I talk to Kuni alone for a bit?" Midnight asked quietly. Sunlight wasn't stupid. Something was wrong. Midnight hated Kuni. Well maybe hate was a too strong of a word, but they sure weren't friends.
"Why should I do that?" Sunlight asked narrowing her eyes.
"Well…talking with Brushie made me realize that I shouldn't judge Kuni just because he's an apple farmer. I've been holding this back from you, and I used to think that you were too good for him, but now thanks to Brushie I've seen the error of my ways and I want to apologize to him." Midnight said
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Literature
Children of the Guardian Chap 20
Children of the Guardian
Chapter 20
*30 Minutes earlier*
"Princess Sunlight we've arrived at Sweet Apple Acres. Would you like an escort to the door?" The guard's rough but caring tone caught Sunlight's ear. "No sir but thank you. You two can go back to the castle now." She said as she stepped off of the chariot causing it to bounce from the lack of weight.
"But your majesty!" The guards began to protest but Sunlight put her hoof up.
"That's a royal order. You two have done more than enough for today. Return to Canterlot, take off your armor, and return home. Or if you're feeling energetic head to a bar." She said winking at them causing them both to blush under their helmets.
Sunlight wasn't a romancer like many believed but she knew she could make a stallion blush if she wanted, and she was telling the truth. The royal guards had spent all day carrying herself and Midnight around, they deserved a nice break. She ended the conversation with a nod and walked toward the small house in t
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Children of the Guardian Chap 19
Children of the Guardian
Chap 19
The remaining ride to Brushie's house was uneventful for Midnight as he continued to let his mind wander. The sound of the pegasi pulling the chariot was the only thing he could hear, allowing his mind to openly dissect and consider the world around him. Part of his mind thought of the upcoming Grand Galloping Gala that was to be held in the castle. According to his mother it had been a while since the Gala had been held. (Mainly because Princess Celestia and Luna found it utterly boring.)
So it had been her idea to revive it with a more modern feel. "Think of it as a giant party where everyone is invited." His father had told him when he informed both he and his sister. "Everypony Dad?" Midnight had asked confused. "Everypony important." His father had replied smiling. He had then told them that they would be allowed to bring up to two ponies that were close to them. Sunlight immediately jumped at the chance and had invited Saturated Flame, whose hat f
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Literature
Children of the Guardian Chap 18
Children of the Guardian
Chap 18
"Thanks again for taking me to Sweet Apple Acres bro." Sunlight said as she climbed into the Royal Chariot with Midnight.
"No problem sis. It's right on the way to see Brushie so I figured I'd give you a lift." He said as he himself stepped into the chariot, nodding at the lead pegasus to take off.
"To be honest I couldn't stand seeing Mom and Dad making out anymore." He said sticking his tongue out disgusted.
"Oh come on Midnight that's not nice. You know that's just how Mom and Dad show their love for each other." Sunlight said making kissing faces and noises with her lips.
"Yeah but it's kinda gross when adults are doing it. It's okay when Brushie and I do it cause we're young and it's understandable."
"Oh Midnight sometimes I wonder how Brushie ever fell for you." Sunlight said laughing as they flew out of Canterlot airspace.
"Hey I take offense to that squirt!" He said jokingly as he rubbed his sister's head playfully. Sunlight only smiled and laug
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Well as I've said before your art style is great, and I love the picture itself. However since this is a critique I do have one complai...


Once again your brilliance shines through. It's amazing to see Caliburn talking to Midnight. Midnight does look like he's aged a great ...


Okay let's see. Vision: Of course it's clear to see she is evil, however certain parts of her appearance contradict it. Like how her sm...

Hey guys, gals, and everything in between. You're all beautiful and God loves you!

So, if anyone here has read my mercenary story or seen my artwork then you may wonder: "Where is the rest of it?" Well short answer: Its coming...but its hard. WRITING is hard and I have so many ideas that they all fight for my attention. 

However I now have a solution. I'm making a Tumblr blog that will allow YOU, yes YOU, to ask questions to the mercenaries and learn more about the world as I upload different pieces and bits of it. I want people to have their own ideas to work with my own, because that's what makes writing and fantasy cool.

www.tumblr.com/blog/askthesilv…

Here's the link if you're interested. Right now I have stuff about the world and the main team so please ask questions or throw some comments my way. You can contact me here too if you're interested or want to talk. Thanks again! 

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TheEnglishGent Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well damn. ;; thanks dudes
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Sunjian54 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2017
No problem man! Your art is worth it, and while I hope one day I'll get a commission or something from you, in the meantime you deserve to post as much as you want without any BS hassle. I know its only a month, but hopefully more people will contribute, I just wanted to be the first to show that I really love your work.
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human72 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017
and what can you tell me about your dragon eliza. :O and her bust. :O
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Sunjian54 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017
As tempting as it is to stare at those enormous headlights or even touch them, DO NOT if you value your life. Unlike Serena, Eliza is not one for compassion and sees herself above almost all living things, as any dragon would.

Standing at 6'3'' Eliza is no pushover and if she can't knock you out with a quick jerk of her chest, those claws will do the job just fine

While she is kind to her master, and does show him respect, this is due to their long time knowing each other and her icy personality fading due to his time with her. Her innermost desires are to rule over many individuals, but since that is a bit out of the question she instead seeks to have others show her the respect she deserves due to her heritage.

When you can pick up cars, smash down steel doors and brick walls, AND breathe fire, its pretty easy to earn that respect. However, once you get through the outer shell you'll find a charming, intelligent, and very esteemed dragon who actually has a desire to make herself stronger.

Her favorite thing to do in fact, is workout and if you come across her in a more peaceful mood, its probably because she just got done doing said workout.
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human72 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017
I c though if one can knock dragons down a few pegs and get away with it what then for her? anyone who has the virtue of humility would gladly take on dragons and knock them down a few pegs so they learn the virtue of humility and remove the deadly sin of pride. if she is for prides sake spices wise etc then that is a deadly sin indeed.

and I see so who is her master anyway? I would like to meat him then.


ah I c though for some to get respect like that from simply doing that does not phase them. though there are other ways to get respect. so she is a softy at heart that likes to work out a lot that's good.


I c though where does she work out at anyway?
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Sunjian54 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017
(First off grammar. Fix it. XD)

2nd: If you can knock them down a few pegs she would be humbled, sure she thinks she is superior but she's not above criticism.

3. He doesn't have a name yet.

4. She works out at any gym that will take her, but they have to be high quality, only the best for her
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human72 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2017
also got bladestrom to work again so more of the cast going up on DA when I can.
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Sunjian54 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2017
Oh nice
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human72 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017
yep
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human72 Featured By Owner May 2, 2017
hi again and I see ox has made your oc emilia. :O she has some large ass boobs. :O
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Sunjian54 Featured By Owner May 2, 2017
Ah yes. Emilia is a Basalisk. Meaning she's larger than Lamia like Mia in EVERYWAY. Like Seriously, you thought Mia was big, no no, Emilia is a lot bigger. Still gentle though.

Also Happy Birthday my friend!
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human72 Featured By Owner May 2, 2017
yea I can tell. :O and I see would like to see her gentleness in action. and what clothing can fit her. :O


and thanks.
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CHCHcartoons Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017
Meep!
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Sunjian54 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017
Meep
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CHCHcartoons Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017
Wanna see a funny video? www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qUNFn…
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